RWBY: Tales of Remnant 'The Four Maidens'

So this was little idea that popped in my head a few days ago. I really enjoyed this volumes "World of Remnant" series, and thought I'd make a little Fairy Tale book inspired by the episode "The Four Maidens" I typed out the exact story that Ozpin narates in the epsiode in the right side page. Let me know what you think.